kia Ora lavanda this is amazing just stunning i did not know how many sugar drinks we drink a day.i had never known how many we drink.Next time you could add some photos. Do you drink sugar drinks. kind regards brayden.
Hello Lavanda, I like the DLO you've used and I do use it often too. I like the graphs that was put into the slide, next time try to put a blurb in your post or maybe a paragraph on what you are trying to show us. Try to change the title for others to make sure it makes sense to others. Aside from that, Nice effort.
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kia Ora lavanda this is amazing just stunning i did not know how many sugar drinks we drink a day.i had never known how many we drink.Next time you could add some photos.
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kind regards
brayden.
Hi Lavanda.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very informative slideshow! For the next time, consider adding some colour to make it more eye catching. Overall, it's actually pretty good.
Hello Lavanda, I like the DLO you've used and I do use it often too. I like the graphs that was put into the slide, next time try to put a blurb in your post or maybe a paragraph on what you are trying to show us. Try to change the title for others to make sure it makes sense to others. Aside from that, Nice effort.
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